William Gragg, T.S. #12
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July 10th, Wednesday
Session #2 with Arsene
Topic/Skill: Reading an opinionated article with multiple viewpoints and devising a personal belief based on supporting evidence from the article.
Feedback provided to the tutee: I aided Arsene in analyzing an article about the taxation of churches and helped him find different viewpoints from the article to agree/disagree with in his own writing. I assisted Arsene with smaller grammatical errors while he was writing and additionally, I curated his writing to make it sound more formal. One of the main grammar points Arsene had trouble with was active vs. passive voice, so I explained the difference to him and helped him omit passive voice in his writing. Lastly, I explained the use of transition words such as "however" and "additionally" and in what context you use each respectively.
Lessons: Modal verbs, articles, and their usage, passive vs active voice, contradictory transitions vs additive transitions. Analyzing an opinionated article and writing an opinionated review of the article.
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